Newsroom Banca: the care work carried out by women

Newsroom Banca: the care work carried out by women


Send your text on the care work carried out by women to the Banco de Redações do Brasil Escola and have your essay corrected for free.

The December theme of the Banco de Redações do Brasil Escola is the same as that which appeared in the Enem 2023 test: The challenges of addressing the invisibility of care work performed by women in Brazil. Sending and correcting the text takes place in a completely free and online.

For those who took the national high school exam (Enem) this year, this is an opportunity to find out how they fared in the assessment. The correction made by the teaching team of the texts sent this month will be published on January 3rd. Iara, Brasil Escola’s artificial intelligence, automatically corrects the essay.

At the Writing Bank students can practice textual production thesis-argumentative text model with topics that are on the rise and can be addressed in Enem and university entrance exams.

How does the Brasil Escola Writing Bank work?

The Banca Newsroom Brasil Escola opens all month three deadlines for submitting papers. Every deadline has a limit of 40 essays for each type of correction (team and Iara).

Remembering that each student can only submit one essay per month and, if the team’s essay limit is reached, it will not be possible to submit it to Iara.

You can send text for correction in two ways, a be corrected by the teaching team or through Iara, the Artificial Intelligence of Brasil Escola.

The result of Iara’s correction is made available automatically in less than a minute and according to the five skills required in Enem.

The team of teachers allows for a more detailed and in-depth correction of the text sent. That the fix will be available on January 3

In the student area, on the Brasil Escola Vestibular website, it is possible to access the correction status of the essay sent by the Essay Bank, as well as the results of the simulations carried out on the site.

When the student sends the essay to Iara for correction, it will be possible to forward the same text to the teachers to carry out another evaluation of the essay. This process can also be done when the user first sends it to the team and wants Iara to correct the same text.

Presentation schedule for December 2023 essays

See this month’s essay database submission deadlines:

  • 1st term: From 1st to 8th December

  • 2nd term: From 10th to 18th December

  • 3rd term: From 20th to 28th December

Correction of Iara’s essays

The correction of the essays by Iara occurs automatically and according to the Enem correction standard, that is, it presents students with the correction of the text based on the five skills assessed by the exam.

The advantage of Iara’s corrections is having feedback with a grade in less than a minute! With this, students will have the opportunity to have quick access to corrections and optimize the study process.

See below an example of an essay on the impact of electronic games on children’s lives submitted by the Writers’ Bank and subsequently corrected by Iara:




Check out the page below where the user can send, by clicking on the orange button, their writing for correction by the Brasil Escola team and the place where they can request correction by Iara, on the green button.



Correction of Iara's writing.

Iara will present the correction of the submitted essay in less than a minute:



Care work carried out by women in Brazil

Video lesson on writing for Enem

Watch the video below for an explanation of Enem’s five writing skills:

Source: Terra

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